Wondering if I wrote something badly (regarding the dialog) in this comic (ESL)11mo ⋅ UgoYak ⋅ r/comic_crits
A test for a strip comic, are the details too distracting? I'm doing some grammatical misktake? Is the lineart too woobly? Is the text legible? What you will correct if you can? Thanks1yr ⋅ UgoYak ⋅ r/comic_crits