drunk - a poem a wrote 5 minutes before I puked my guts out last night3yr ⋅ killer_yee ⋅ r/poetry_critics
The Little Pocket-universe Of A Car: this poem is heavily inspired by experience, obviously, but also an attempt to capture the vaporwave or outrun aesthetic in words.2yr ⋅ VictimNumberThree ⋅ r/poetry_critics
New to writing and even newer to submitting, hoping to get some feedback.3yr ⋅ rcbarr94 ⋅ r/poetry_critics
First poem I have ever shared. I’m trying to get better at accepting criticism. Look out world, I’m inching my way towards being brave.3yr ⋅ clecle01 ⋅ r/poetry_critics
Please somebody help me understand this! I am not good with poetry. But this is just 100% a contradiction of itself. Whyyyy 😭😭3yr ⋅ katatat1 ⋅ r/poetry_critics
It’s not perfect but I really had to share this one somewhere. It’s about being crazy and about seeing angels.3yr ⋅ jajaishahainspanish ⋅ r/poetry_critics
text me in December draft 2 (I would really appreciate feedback, considering I took your original feedback and applied it to this draft)3yr ⋅ killer_yee ⋅ r/poetry_critics
Greetings fellow Reddit Poets. My first offering is an Acrostic style poem. A Journey...3yr ⋅ paracosmicpioneer ⋅ r/poetry_critics
Everyone assumed I was a male from my last post because it involved working outdoors so before folks assume from this one that I’m a guy: I am not. Yay queers.3yr ⋅ rcbarr94 ⋅ r/poetry_critics
This started out super short and then expanded. I really wanted to convey the pain and shame involved in being the main participant in your own emotional pain through destructive behaviors and not being able to blame others for the harm they’ve done to you. I hope that comes through!3yr ⋅ princess-elsa ⋅ r/poetry_critics
Genuinely trying to get better - please give me constructive criticism/share your thoughts! I’d love to do the same for you. Also, this is absolutely terrifying. No one in my real life knows about this blog haha.4yr ⋅ ongoingo ⋅ r/poetry_critics
I wrote this one whilst walking around my neighborhood yesterday. It’s called “Ode to Spring”.3yr ⋅ shenandoahcs ⋅ r/poetry_critics
Felt very depressed recently, so I wrote until I felt better. Here’s the product of that.3yr ⋅ starfoxhound ⋅ r/poetry_critics
A piecemeal poem using “small accomplishment” stickers--criticism welcome3yr ⋅ blckmooncat ⋅ r/poetry_critics
a haiku about my car, doris, who’s battery died this morning lol3yr ⋅ laurelfairweather ⋅ r/poetry_critics
idk i just joined this thing so whatever, ive been commenting on a lot of stuff so itd be nice for reciprocation4yr ⋅ Pishwual_Phishcal ⋅ r/poetry_critics
I might do a bunch of other poems in a similar style. Do I even have a style? Should I make this longer? This is the first I’ve shared in a long long time.3yr ⋅ hptredd ⋅ r/poetry_critics
I wrote this for someone very special to me. Please give me your feedback and any ideas you might have for a title!!3yr ⋅ boulosa ⋅ r/poetry_critics
Thoughts and impressions? I feel like a lot of the stuff I write isn't really poetry. But maybe I'm overthinking it.3yr ⋅ bird-clock ⋅ r/poetry_critics
Do your worst reddit, I’m feeling like my poetry is falling flat3yr ⋅ Iceandfire29 ⋅ r/poetry_critics
‘There Is No Heaven’. A piece I wrote recently about an insatiable lust. Please do review/critique! I want to improve on my writing.3yr ⋅ fishandcreeps ⋅ r/poetry_critics
something that happened to me awhile ago, i wrote about it to help me accept that it had happened4yr ⋅ The_Rhetorician ⋅ r/poetry_critics
Okay, first post. I know you guys are nice, but please don't hold any punches.4yr ⋅ [deleted] ⋅ r/poetry_critics
I’m a beginner and I’m practicing short poems, your feedback needed and appreciated3yr ⋅ AzizBlink ⋅ r/poetry_critics
a poem i wrote at work i kind of like. please, any feedback is welcome.3yr ⋅ tristian2215 ⋅ r/poetry_critics
